User talk:52JDH/sandbox

I think what you have so far is very well done. It follows the manual styles of Wikipedia correctly and you use the correct language for the subject. You used plenty of sources and cited them all correctly. It seems as though you have a really good grasp of what's going on. I would maybe try to find a few places to hyperlink in the Technology section to explain a little bit more there. But overall, it is very well organized and you have quite a bit of information to share. Good job! Lhsmith430 (talk) 16:20, 15 November 2013 (UTC)

The one thing that I did notice was in your article you state that the Lifeproof case was first introduced for the iPhone 4 in early 2011, while in your group members article it states that this first product was 4th generation iPod touch with the iPhone 4 coming after. Although I know that it is a minor detail I just wanted to point that out because it seemed to catch my eye, other than I completely agree with Levi it is formatted very well and you use a lot of hyperlinks within your article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bradmwells (talk • contribs) 16:37, 15 November 2013 (UTC)