User talk:60.240.56.121

August 2022
Hello, I'm Gsquaredxc. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Don Dunstan seemed less than neutral to me, so I removed it for now. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Gsquaredxc (talk) 02:52, 27 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi--thanks for the edit msg on following sentence:
 * In 1954, the LCL introduced the Government Electoral Bill, which was designed to further accentuate the undue weight on rural voters.
 * I changed:
 * "further accentuate the undue weight on rural voters"
 * to
 * "increase the voting bias favouring rural electorates."
 * My concern is "undue weight on rural voters" reads like 'undue burden on rural voters.'
 * How about changing "on" to "favouring" as follows?
 * "further accentuate the undue weight favouring rural voters" 60.240.56.121 (talk) 03:16, 27 August 2022 (UTC)