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I believe the use of, "is a serious issue that may have a major detrimental impact" in your article is too wordy. The sentence should be more concise. The first paragraph of the article should elaborate more on the vocabulary: dark triadic, honest-homily traits, and Machiavellianism, so the reader can understand the content further. Even though there are links to other articles that provide more information, I have noticed that most people would much rather be able to find all the information they need in one article, without having to research the contents of the article itself. Finally, in the section about job interviews, I think it would be more supporting to provide proof of knowledge about how people rate how favorable narcissists are during interviews, maybe even statistics. Calista.mccormack (talk) 05:16, 23 February 2020 (UTC)