User talk:67.150.98.162

August 2022
Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. I noticed that you recently added commentary to an article, Karen Sharpe. While Wikipedia welcomes editors' opinions on an article and how it could be changed, these comments are more appropriate for the article's accompanying talk page. If you post your comments there, other editors working on the same article will notice and respond to them, and your comments will not disrupt the flow of the article. However, keep in mind that even on the talk page of an article, you should limit your discussion to improving the article. Article talk pages are not the place to discuss opinions of the subject of articles, nor are such pages a forum. Thank you. Hey man im josh (talk) 18:49, 11 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Hello. The only comment I added was that the grammar needed to be corrected so that the information could be understood; it was so convoluted it was impossible to follow. The grammar and sentence structure was so bad that I didn't dare attempt to edit it myself, since I couldn't be sure of the original author's meaning, and I didn't want to accidentally change it. I don't remember the errors, but as I look at the page now I see none. As such, my comment did its job, the grammar was fixed, and your message wasn't necessary. But thanks. 67.150.98.162 (talk) 16:41, 18 September 2022 (UTC)