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November 2020
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True Justice
I treated your edit as a casual spam edit but it now seems I should have left a specific explanation because you were serious about it and I had not left a message. Your edit was colloquial and not in encyclopedic language. Thus, it was more in the style of a blog than an encyclopedia. It was short and wasn't very informative. "A cool guy sticks it too (note sp.) the big banks, and the Yakuza do some stuff. The SIU is also present (most of the time)." Yakuza do "some stuff" isn't informative or encyclopedic, especially to anyone not familiar with the series or topic. Also, does the Yakuza reference have to do with only one episode? It isn't mentioned elsewhere in the article except in an episode title. I know it is a criminal gang but how many readers should be expected to know that. Presumably, criminal acts are the stuff, but who would know that unless they saw the episode. I don't see SIU fully spelled out or explained in the article and why that is of any significance. A more informative description in plain style would be appropriate, but the entry was not written that way. So if you would like to add one that is more precise and more encyclopedic, please feel free to do so. Donner60 (talk) 23:02, 27 March 2021 (UTC)

Response: Fair enough I'll do better.