User talk:68.111.161.247

Hello, I'm Materialscientist. I noticed that you made an edit to a biography of a living person, but that you didn’t support your changes with a citation to a reliable source. Wikipedia has a strict policy concerning how we write about living people, so please help us keep such articles accurate. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Materialscientist (talk) 04:20, 1 December 2012 (UTC)


 * The intro of articles summarizes the body of the article. If something is supported in the body, it's baseless to remove it from the intro on the grounds of "uncited."  The last paragraph of the intro is summarizing the "criticism" section that you keep moving it to, so moving it there renders it redundant.  Pay attention and read more of the article instead of just the intro instead of engaging in a slow edit war to censor the intro.  Ian.thomson (talk) 22:03, 18 November 2018 (UTC)