User talk:68.117.84.37

February 2024
Hello, I'm My Pants Metal. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Chippewa Falls High School, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at referencing for beginners. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. My Pants Metal (talk) 18:31, 8 February 2024 (UTC)

Chippewa Falls High School
Thank you for providing sources. However, it still needs to be re-written. Your edits violated Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy, as well Wikipedia's policy on speculation. For example, your edits stated:

"Where the student is now, no one knows. They could even still be out there plotting their massacre."

This is speculation and isn't allowed on Wikipedia. Additionally, your edits stated this was a cover-up by the school. None of the sources provided mentioned a "cover-up" so it should be avoided in the article.

Furthermore, this information shouldn't be in the lead-in sentence of the article. Wikipedia has a certain manual of style that we have to adhere to. My Pants Metal (talk) 19:07, 8 February 2024 (UTC)