User talk:68.131.45.241

January 2018
Hello, I appreciate that you tried to improve the article Hilly Michaels, but unfortunately I've had to remove your addition because it was just too problematic. Since we work on a collaborative model, other editors can take care of minor issues in submissions, but every sentence you added needed help. I would advise you to read around Wikipedia more before submitting again, to get a sense of the tone of the articles here. It is much less effusive and impersonal in tone than what you added. Also, you need to learn the basics of formatting, and style guide details, such as how Wikipedia expects album titles to be punctuated. The Help links to the left of the page will be of use. I don't mean to dissuade you from contributing here - what you added looks like valid information, it's just not yet in a Wikipedia-standard form. If I can help with anything, please let me know. Jessicapierce (talk) 19:57, 29 January 2018 (UTC)