User talk:69.201.133.58

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Happy editing! Adakiko (talk) 09:58, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Wolfgang Busch
Words that are not proper nouns should use sentence case. Examples: "Authentic Art documentaries" should be "authentic art documentaries" - unless it's the name of a film then it should be italicized. "University students" should be lower case; "university" is not a proper noun. "... and Ballroom Icon Octavia St. Laurent"?

That second external link is a mess. It's two links; the second "Wolfgang's new release is [Flow Affair..." probably should be included in the article body above. Can you please fix this? Thank you Adakiko (talk) 09:58, 12 June 2023 (UTC)