User talk:71.211.244.40

March 2023
Hello, I'm Nagol0929. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Dead Famous (novel) seemed less than neutral and has been removed. If you think this was a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Nagol0929 (talk) 14:32, 21 March 2023 (UTC)


 * I don't see how it was any less neutral than the coments about the characters in the cast section of the play. The existing stuff for the crew members is bland and says nothing about their personalities even though they have personalities. I don't see why calling Geraldine, who turns out to be a murderous villain, greedy and hot-tempered, is unacceptable, for instance. 71.211.244.40 (talk) 02:04, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
 * it still is npov as the cast is just stating the characters not their character Nagol0929 (talk) 12:55, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
 * The cast description has phrases like "vain", "snobbish", "stereotypical lager lout", ""beautiful but uninitelligent", "antisocial and unhygenic", and "uninteresting." That stuff is defininetely about the character of the characters and I don't see how what I wrote is any different. All of what I put is stuff that other characters say or think about those characters. 71.211.244.40 (talk) 18:33, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
 * But it still does not belong in the cast section as it is just stating their names if you would like to reflect on their characters then i would do so in the plot section. Nagol0929 (talk) 02:05, 27 March 2023 (UTC)