User talk:72.16.218.22

Your submission at Articles for creation: ShopVisible (November 28)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: ShopVisible (December 4)
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February 2014
Hello, I'm Jim1138. I noticed that you made a change to an article, SalesLoft, but you didn't provide a source. I’ve removed it for now, but if you’d like to include a citation to a reliable source and re-add it, please do so! If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Jim1138 (talk) 16:45, 19 February 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: ShopVisible (February 26)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: ShopVisible (March 28)
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Kevin Rutherford (talk) 04:24, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: ShopVisible (May 28)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: ShopVisible
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66.194.102.6 (talk) 22:49, 23 June 2014 (UTC) I am writing here to find out why this article was denied yet again, after I have made all of the changes requested by previous editors. This article was declined in December for reading like an advertisement, so I made the necessary changes then to be told there were issues with notability, which I've revised. After the changes were made for reading like an advertisement back in December, this problem (reading like an advertisement) was never brought up again by any other editors until now, so I am having trouble understanding why the previous three editors did not mention that this read like an advertisement - but that is the reason I am being denied now.
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Additionally, ShopVisible competitors (same industry) have published Wikipedia articles that read much more like an advertisement based on your guidelines ( for example - [|Magento], ) so please highlight for me where our article sounds like an advertisement and what specific changes need to be made since competing companies are able to use the same voice and language discussing industry trends and offerings, yet my article submission keeps getting denied. 66.194.102.6 (talk) 22:49, 23 June 2014 (UTC)Jennifer Blackburn

ShopVisible
I am slightly mistaken, ShopVisible reads like an advertisement because it isn't written from a neutral point of view. It talks about the companies goals and aspirations etc. but doesn't talk about setbacks, downfalls etc. Another problem with the article is it uses Bare URL's for references. You can fix this by using the reflinks tool. The final minor problem is you have used 3 equals signs to separate sections and a normal article would use two. Aneditor (talk tome) 22:10, 27 June 2014 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ShopVisible concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ShopVisible, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Your draft article, Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ShopVisible


Hello 72.16.218.22. It has been over six months since you last edited your WP:AFC draft article submission, entitled "ShopVisible".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. C679 11:34, 17 December 2014 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Smartup (January 18)
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LaMona (talk) 01:00, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Smartup (May 15)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Adyoo3 was:

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Adyoo3 (talk) 03:46, 15 May 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Smartup concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Smartup, a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:37, 16 November 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Smartup


Hello, 72.16.218.22. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Smartup".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 13:58, 16 November 2015 (UTC)