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72tigers (talk) 05:36, 12 February 2015 (UTC) alchol article 72tigers (talk) 22:57, 19 February 2015 (UTC) http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=15719169&site=ehost-live&scope=site tea article

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http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=99988406&site=ehost-live&scope=site coffee article 72tigers (talk) 23:27, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

|72tigers%5D%5D%20(%5B%5BUser%20talk:72tigers|talk%5D%5D)%2023:02,%2019%20February%202015%20(UTC) http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=99794492&site=ehost-live&scope=site[[User:72tigers|72tigers] (talk ) 23:02, 19 February 2015 (UTC)] Alcohol reference 72tigers (talk) 00:53, 20 February 2015 (UTC) http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=7072480&site=ehost-live&scope=site Caffeine Addiction Article true
 * I approve your article, but I'm not sure all of your sources are entirely relevant. Instead of researching rather marginal beverages like caffeinated beer, why not look up some sources on tea or coffee? Josef Horáček (talk) 18:01, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Nice work! Josef Horáček (talk) 22:55, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 1
Did you delete the discussion on Assignment 1 from your talk page by mistake? I did like your edits to "Happy Pills." My only suggestion is to put the words "catchy" and "breezy" in separate quotation marks (like I just did). They each come from a different source. Josef Horáček (talk) 14:37, 17 February 2015 (UTC)

Lead Section Addition/Clean-Up
72tigers (talk) 16:19, 19 February 2015 (UTC)
 * I recommend that you find another article. Josef Horáček (talk) 22:52, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Ok I've found a new article Oyster Reef Restoration I feel like I'll be able to find a lot of pertinent information using the LSU database on this article. 72tigers (talk) 04:47, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

Analysis of Oyster Reef Restoration Article: The article itself is well stocked with information, almost enough to write a lead on without extensive external research. It is mentioned in the warning attached to the article, some details or jargon within the article is confusing. I believe the confusion comes from references to both restoration of oysters themselves rather than an "oyster reef." With the right amount of background in a lead section these incongruities or simply miscommunications could be cleared up. 72tigers (talk) 04:52, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good choice. The article is indeed confusing. Several topics are mixed together: the natural formation of oyster reefs, the history of oyster harvesting, and conservation itself. One quick fix would be to provide more specific section headings. Of course a good lead will help. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:48, 27 February 2015 (UTC)

New Lead Section for Oyster Reef Restoration Article
Oyster Reef restoration refers to the process of rebuilding or restoring of oyster reefs all over the globe. Over time, oysters have been negatively affected by environmental change, such as harmful fishing techniques, over harvesting  ,  water pollution, and other factors. The results of these factors have been disease and ultimately, a large decline in the global population of oysters and the prevalence and sustainability of oyster reefs. Oyster reefs are naturally formed as oysters inhabit an area of coast, so without a large enough population the reefs break down, harming the remaining oysters on the reef and preventing the repopulation of more oysters in the future. It is estimated that as much as 85% of the world’s oysters are now extinct or not ecologically functioning because of miniscule population sizes. The reefs greatly contribute to marine ecosystems by providing many positive services such as stabilizing shorelines, enhancing and regulating water quality, and providing a habitat for other marine life within the system. Aside from just the ecological importance of oyster reefs, oyster farming for both human consumption, and pearl farming are very import industries, particularly in coastal areas. Discoveries in the importance of Oyster Reefs to Marine Ecology have led to increased restoration efforts by both Government and Environmental Groups. Both artificial materials and natural components have been used to rebuild the reefs in an attempt to regenerate the oyster population thus fostering the reformation of reefs. Research continues today to determine how to best repair the reefs and increase oyster populations globally. 72tigers (talk) 18:41, 26 February 2015 (UTC) 72tigers (talk) 20:26, 26 February 2015 (UTC)
 * This is a great start. Among the beneficial qualities of oyster reefs, you shouldn't forget to mention that they are harvested for human consumption. Also, say a bit more about the process of restoration - I assume that rebuilding the reefs themselves helps oysters live and multiply? This isn't obvious and should be explained. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:56, 27 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Good job. There are only minor I'd still suggest - "overharvesting" is one word, and citation number three should go to the end of the sentence. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:05, 10 March 2015 (UTC)

Articles Pertaining to Oyster Reef Restoration
http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=101133036&site=ehost-live&scope=site Oyster reef restoration: effect of alternative substrates on oyster recruitment and nekton habitat use.

http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=94308000&site=ehost-live&scope=site Temporal variation in development of ecosystem services from oyster reef restoration.

http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=16502139&site=ehost-live&scope=site Oyster Reef Habitat Restoration: Relationships Between Oyster Abundance and Community Development based on Two Studies in Virginia and South Carolina. 72tigers (talk) 18:21, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=66781898&site=ehost-live&scope=site Coastal & Marine Communities.

http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=14189602&site=ehost-live&scope=site Beneficial use of dredged material for habitat creation, enhancement, and restoration in New York–New Jersey Harbor.

http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=82900564&site=ehost-live&scope=site Economic Valuation of Ecosystem Services Provided by Oyster Reefs. 72tigers (talk) 18:44, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

72tigers (talk) 18:32, 26 February 2015 (UTC)

http://libezp.lib.lsu.edu/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=a9h&AN=79785106&site=ehost-live&scope=site A Restoration Suitability Index Model for the Eastern Oyster (Crassostrea virginica) in the Mission-Aransas Estuary, TX, USA. 72tigers (talk) 19:00, 26 February 2015 (UTC)