User talk:74.214.108.174

November 2019
Hello, I'm The Grand Delusion. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Pokémon Sword and Shield seemed less than neutral and has been removed. If you think this was a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. The Grand Delusion (Send a message) 18:04, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
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Please do not add commentary, your own point of view, or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to Pokémon Sword and Shield. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. The Grand Delusion (Send a message) 18:08, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
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In the post-release section I did not add any personal analysis. I included a sourced review from Eurogamer, and acknowledged disagreement with another review in the comments of the article. 74.214.108.174 (talk) 18:11, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
 * The disagreement with a review comes off to me as a violation of WP:NPOV. The Eurogamer review I have no issue with. The Grand Delusion (Send a message) 18:14, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

I could understand the concern with NPOV, but generally speaking I'd think you would want to include both sides of the argument in order to achieve NPOV. The comments I cited were made directly in the comments of the review itself. Including only the review and not any disagreements at least on my end seems more a violation of NPOV than just mentioning the review itself, especially if it calls into the question the validity or impartiality. To that same effect, in the pre-release section it also seems more a violation to omit other criticisms made by fans other than just the "National Dex" issue than to just state that as the main criticism, since more information has come out since the original announcement. 74.214.108.174 (talk) 18:16, 13 November 2019 (UTC)

Please stop your disruptive editing. If you continue to violate Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy by adding commentary and your personal analysis into articles, as you did at Pokémon Sword and Shield, you may be blocked from editing. The Grand Delusion (Send a message) 18:47, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
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