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Your submission at Articles for creation: Principal series (spectroscopy) (June 17)
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Your draft article, Draft:Principal series (spectroscopy)


Hello, 74.69.160.254. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Principal series".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 02:27, 17 December 2020 (UTC)

Hartland Snyder
The current text includes a statement regarding the "collapsar model" as if this collapsar theory of black holes is mainstream. This collapsar theory is relevant to Snyder's area of research but is not so prominent as to require any mention in a description of Snyder's work.

Visible-light astronomy
It makes no sense that JWST has a section (with title) in this article. A brief mention of JWST, e.g., as HST's successor, and the fact that it was chosen to be infrared, would make some sense, but a whole section seems ludicrous when there's no similar description of Keck, the ELT, or other truly relevant developments.