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This page is written so academically as to be nearly indecipherable. The opening paragraph tells me many things about the discussion of the naturalistic fallacy, including telling me what it isn't, but makes no attempt to clearly and concisely introduce the topic by telling me what it is. This page utterly fails on any standard of readability. I'd love to work on it and contribute, but as this is not my area of expertise, perhaps someone more knowledgable can coordinate with someone with some actual writing skill and make a page that people can understand.