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Happy editing! Peaceray (talk) 19:08, 26 September 2020 (UTC)

Problems with your addition to Robert Kiyosaki
Your edits to Robert Kiyosaki had some problems. I made two adaptions.
 * To single out the Rich Global LLC bankruptcy in the lead was too much detail. Please see MOS:LEAD. The lead is supposed to be a summary of the article.
 * If it is important to mention bankruptcies in the lead, it should be generically since there was at least three. I do not think that singling one particular unnotable bankruptcy to add to the lead is appropriate.
 * You failed to include a citation for this. This is then a violation of English Wikipedia's biography of living persons policy.
 * 1) I removed your added language from the lead & added "and was ordered to pay nearly $24 million to the Learning Annex and its founder" to Robert Kiyosaki.
 * 2) I added this citation following that additional text:

Peaceray (talk) 19:20, 26 September 2020 (UTC)