User talk:79.67.175.31

October 2017
Hello, I'm Jim1138. An edit you recently made to Subedi seemed to be a test and has been removed. If you want more practice editing, the sandbox is the best place to do so. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thanks. Jim1138 (talk) 09:21, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

Surya Subedi
Hi. Some of your edits to the Surya Subedi article have been reverted. These include, for example, adding a quote extracted from CNN opinion piece. (Per WP:NOTCV and WP:NOTLINKEDIN and other related guidelines [and my previous comments on the article itself], this article feels more like a personal CV or essay of the subject than a neutral and dispassionate encyclopedia entry. This quote does nothing to help address that tonal/first-person issue). Also included, for example, was a change you made to remove text from the body -seemingly because it was already in the lead. (Per WP:LEAD, the introduction is supposed to summarise the text of the body - just because something is stated in summary form [in the lead] doesn't mean it should be removed from else where in the article [the body].) If you are considering other substantive changes to this article, I'd encourage the use of the relevant talk page. Thanks. Guliolopez (talk) 12:29, 21 October 2017 (UTC)