User talk:82.28.205.74

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Avery (March 1)
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&mdash; kikichugirl  oh hello! 08:45, 1 March 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: David Avery (March 5)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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Onel5969 (talk) 03:02, 5 March 2015 (UTC)