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Kalpana Mohan Page

Hi, Thank you so much for advice & resolving it. I really appreciate it. Youtube may not be 100% accurate but Times of India article on Kalpana Mohan has to be reliable as it is published newspaper facts & on basis of it Kalpana Mohan Wikipedia article is based, you can too fact check the link given in the Kalpana Mohan reference.

Since I cannot be attached a snapshot here I copy paste from the article "Kalpana Mohan was born in Srinagar on July 18, 1946. Her father, Avani Mohan, a freedom fighter, was close to Pandit Jawaharlal Nehru and an active member of the All India Congress Committee. Kalpana, who trained in Kathak, was often invited by Nehru to dance at the Rashtrapati Bhavan whenever dignitaries visited. She was spotted by actor Balraj Sahani and Urdu writer Ismat Chughtai, who encouraged her to come to Mumbai. Kalpana got her first break in the movie Professor in 1962."

Link: https://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/entertainment/hindi/bollywood/news/Shammi-Kapoors-Gulbadan-Kalpana-Mohan-dies-at-65/etarticleshow/11433606.cms?referral=PM

Compare my changes which you can update now as fact are verified.

Early life: She was also an accomplished Kathak dancer trained under Pandit Shambhu Maharaj. She was a good swimmer & Horse rider too.

Career: Nehru often invited Kalpana, a trained Kathak dancer, to dance at the Rashtrapati Bhavan whenever dignitaries visited. Actor Balraj Sahani and Urdu writer Ismat Chughtai spotted the beautiful dancer and encouraged her to come to Mumbai and try her luck in films.

Filmography 1. Pyar Ki Jeet (1962) 2. Naughty Boy (1962) 3. Professor (1962) 4. Saheli (1965) 5. Teesra Kaun (1965) 6. Teen Devian (1965) 7. Biwi Aur Makan (1966) 8. Tasveer (1966) 9. Pyar Kiye Jaa (1966) 10. Nawab Sirazuddaula (1967) 11. Ek Bechara (1972)

I really appreciate your guidance & help for a beginner. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yashkkaryan (talk • contribs) 23 April 2019 (UTC)

If you insist on a page for Kalpana Mohan just start a Draft:Kalpana Mohan and pick an existing page for a Bollywood star as an inspiration for your draft before you "submit" it. The first line in your draft should be, and you can ignore missing categories and images while it is a draft. –2A03:2267:2:0:600A:3179:710E:EEA7 (talk) 16:17, 24 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi, talk pages of IPs do not really work, one day later, and I have another IP from another ISP, and folks outside the EU are often surprised that moving to Germany will get them the worst Internet they've ever seen.

Draft: Susan Hudson
Thank you for your contributions to Draft:Susan Hudson. There is no thank you option on the edits - so I thought I'd drop a note on your talk page. :-) LorriBrown (talk) 23:15, 26 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Somehow I stumbled over your message here, have fun with Schwarz, it looks far more promising than Hudson with her one and only book. –84.46.53.12 (talk) 20:21, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello 84.46.53.12! How can I better communicate with you?  Your are quite mysterious.   I found her name on the 'Women in Red' project page. I was very surprised that she didn't already have a page written about her.  She seems quite accomplished. I've gleaned the basics from the articles - I think, but have questions about lists and if I've done them correctly, i.e her exhibitions, catalogues, collections, etc. I've tried things before on the Kent Tate article but am not completely clear if the article was cut down before of my bad editing or because I had a conflict of interest and therefore everything was viewed with a more critical eye.  I think the Schwarz article could really be developed by a more experienced editor/writer as there is a lot of information, which I've tried to link to on the talk page and in the further reading section in addition to the references. Please feel free to jump in if you are so inclined...LorriBrown (talk) 21:35, 29 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Looking for images I found c:Commons:Deletion_requests/Files_uploaded_by_Cheri_Brown, and parked four files in a gallery on Kent Tate, something is odd: As of today it looks like an ordinary copyvio, i.e., the images have to be deleted, but the license on one of the images was reviewed and found to be okay. Nothing to do actually, I asked the reviewer what they saw. –84.46.53.12 (talk) 23:44, 29 April 2019 (UTC)


 * 84.46.53.12 Thanks for doing that.  I had those pictures posted to an earlier version of Kent Tate (draft) but they were removed and tagged for deletion.  I was waiting for them to be deleted (seem to be taking a very long time), before asking Kent to upload them himself to Wikimedia Commons.  Kent posted a pic "Kent Tate" a thumb nail of himself recently to Wikimedia Commons - but it was removed.  I was hoping to ask someone to put it on his page.  Any ideas?  The picture was the same as one that was previously deleted and with the same name ...  Not sure how to get around the name... his name is Kent Tate.LorriBrown (talk) 03:00, 30 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I've reverted the gallery, the license reviewer doesn't recall why they accepted CC-BY on one of these images, without that everything appears to be non-free (=will be deleted, if somebody on Commons gets around to do that. Commons used to be my home turf when I still logged-in ;-) –84.46.52.129 (talk) 21:39, 30 April 2019 (UTC)