User talk:8isfate/3racha Sandbox subpage

= Review =

Excellent start! I made a few edits (see your page's history). When you've addressed my suggestions, please proceed according to the directions in the syllabus.

-Reagle (talk) 18:08, 22 October 2020 (UTC)
 * moving citations after terminating periods
 * finish references and fix those showing red text
 * explain what is meant by "training"
 * move to mainspace
 * once it's live, make sure it's not a Orphan
 * and add categories then too
 * maybe a photo (?)


 * Thanks for the edits; I did some tweaks. I'm not sure what is going on with citations 53--56? -Reagle (talk) 12:08, 23 October 2020 (UTC)