User talk:8kelvins

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I should like to add my welcome to that given above. Also, there are a couple of points worth mentioning about your editing.

I see that you have been making a number of small changes to wording, to improve the English. In most cases that has been helpful, and thank you for that. However, you need to take care to avoid making mistakes. for example, in one article you replaced "but the official documentation shows the retirement year as 2018", which is perfectly good English, with "but official documentation the year as 2018", which is not coherent English at all. In the article Novi Iskar shooting you wrote "Katie Kyukhova went for a walk with her dog, Rosen", but if you read the rest of the article you will see that Rosen was not a dog. As I have already said, most of your changes are helpful, but you need to take care to avoid further mistakes similar to those I have mentioned.

When you add content to an article you should provide a reference to a reliable source for verification. JBW (talk) 21:59, 22 May 2021 (UTC)