User talk:911skittles/sandbox

Sam Pancake edits
In general, the article itself lacks information, however when I did more research, there was not much to find, especially from credible sources. This made it critical to find the information I needed to provide the reader with an accurate information.

To enhance this article, an image of Sam Pancake was inserted as his identity was anonymous. Since inserting images of Pancake has helped me to recognize him, as he showed up in many popular television shows, this will ensure that more people will be able to recognize him as well.

Second of all, the flow of the article needed a lot of work, thus been detailed more. For example, "Sam Pancake is an American actor, born May 10, 1964 in Petersburg, West Virginia" was expanded to "Sam Pancake is a 52 years old American Actor, Improvisor, Writer and a Comedian. He was born on May 10th, 1964". This change has expanded the length of the article, made it look more attractive and detailed his birthday in a more attractive way.

Also, a section called "Education" was inserted to help the reader to be familiar with the education he had received before appearing in television shows. There was not much about his education, but changing "Pancake graduated from Hampshire High School in West Virginia and currently resides in Los Angeles." to "Pancake graduated from Hampshire High School in West Virginia and graduated cum laude with a Bachelor of Fine Arts(BFA) in Theater from West Virginia University" will give the reader a more clear image about his level of education, the degrees he has and what university he attended.

A lot of questions appeared in the "Personal life" section as the writer has blended his personal and work life together, separating his work life from his personal life offered a room for more curiosity, thus more answers for the reader were provided. For example, his family's names, their careers, marital status and his sexuality were the most important elements that were contoured throughout the section.

In general, the lack of information has appeared all over the article, this has caused confusion to its readers. Making changes to this article will help the reader to be more interested into reading it and benefiting from it.