User talk:92.195.45.80

Your submission at Articles for creation: Eberhard Kloke (March 19)
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Legacypac (talk) 03:40, 19 March 2019 (UTC)

Ways to improve Eberhard Kloke
Hello, 92.195.45.80,

Thank you for creating Eberhard Kloke.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

"The timeline needs to be restructured. Date content like 2018 then back to 2010-2013, 2017, 2020, back to 2002, 2017... makes it appear unfocused certainly needing sections."

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, leave a comment here and prepend it with. And, don't forget to sign your reply with. For broader editing help, please visit the Teahouse.

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Otr500 (talk) 05:59, 31 October 2019 (UTC)