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This entry states 3500 killed on the river bank and then 20,000 in another paragraph. It states shoes of iron in one paragraph and then shoes of bronze in another. Someone needs to do a much better job at researching before posting misleading information such as this.

This is for anyone and everyone who author's these biographies, especially on women. When writing about a female, you don't refer to her by her last name, but by her full name or her first name. For example, "Pence did this" or "Pence did that" or "Pence said this" is incorrect, it should be either "Charlotte started school" or "Charlotte stated such and such" or even "Ms. Pence did this."