User talk:96.237.54.222

May 2021
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edits to Murder of Laci Peterson, as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edits had to be reverted, for the following reasons:


 * First, with regard to Laci Peterson's parents, Wikipedia cannot accept uncited material. Wikipedia requires that the material in its articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable (usually secondary) sources explicitly cited in the article text in the form of an inline citation, which you can learn to make here.


 * Second, while the passage mentioning the unknown identity of the woman with whom Scott Peterson had his first extramarital affair is incorrect, Amber Frey's name is already given further down in the article, with citations. The first passage, however, can be amended with simple copyediting, which I did. Adding an incoherently-written notes that don't even exhibit basic sentence structure, or proper casing or spacing is not the proper solution.

Take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia, and if you would like to experiment, please use the sandbox. Thanks. Nightscream (talk) 16:14, 3 May 2021 (UTC)