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Your submission at Articles for creation: Darian Kovacs (November 28)
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AngusWOOF ( bark  •  sniff ) 17:04, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Hello,

Thank you for the feedback, I'll look to improve the syntax of the article so that it feels less "resume-like". I was wanting to keep the language a little more neutral while still displaying his noteworthiness. Obviously, I failed. I'm also trying to be sensitive to the fact that somebody before me tried really hard to get a page for him when he wasn't noteworthy and was really spammy with it. I'd hate to come across that way as that isn't my intention. Anyway, thank you for your gracious feedback and I'll work on the language to show why Darian is noteworthy.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reece Mack (January 14)
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AngusWOOF ( bark  •  sniff ) 22:47, 14 January 2019 (UTC)