User talk:98.19.30.48

November 2020
 Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, please note that there is a Manual of Style that should be followed to maintain a consistent, encyclopedic appearance. Deviating from this style, as you did in Red Dead Revolver, disturbs uniformity among articles and may cause readability or accessibility problems. Please take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. Donner60 (talk) 02:49, 20 November 2020 (UTC)
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 * I should have explained this more specifically. I have looked at this again due to your comment. Your change to "In the 1868" was probably inadvertent. A sentence should not start with a numeral. "Twelve" would be ok. You would have had to dig around to find the latter in the Manual. Also, I considered that your change of date and addition of teenager were unsourced. However, the whole description is unsourced and under those circumstances, I can not be critical of the change for which you have a reasonable basis. Happy editing. Donner60 (talk) 03:26, 20 November 2020 (UTC)


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 * I rolled back my edit and then made the style corrections. Donner60 (talk) 03:30, 20 November 2020 (UTC)