User talk:988king

'''Students should not be pressured to study so much Korea is a country where academies and after-schools bring billions of pure benefit annually. According to a research, approximately 5, 0000 academies exist in South Korea. This is a superfluous number. However, this means that students are kept under pressure to study against their will. Students should not be pressured to study because pressure pollutes the meaning of studying, and because it is against the constitution. The first reason why students should not be pressured to study so much is because pressure itself pollutes the pure meaning of studying. Many parents in Korea, for example, believe that academies can make their children go to good universities and thus have a better quality of life. So, they send their children to tough universities where an elementary student learns high school math and hear a lecture on Pythagoras’s triangle for 5 hours, five times a day. However, students are not at all willing to be put in a teaching box. Even though some students long for academies, majority doesn’t want to study. The second and the final reason why students must not be pressured to study are because it is against the constitution. Even though a child is under care of their parents until they are mentally and physically mature enough to make decisions on their own. However, a child must learn the constitution as one grows up, and learn that there are laws to be kept when older. This will bring a better society for children and their children to happily grow in. In conclusion, students must not be pressured to study. Pressuring students to study pollutes the pure meaning of studying. Moreover, it is against the constitution to do so. People believe that studying in tight situations automatically brings high grades. However, they must learn that pressure will not support nor even have any positive impacts on students.