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There are numerous grammatical errors in this article. It reads as if written by a third grader.

“On April 3, 1989, around 10:00” AM or PM?

“Green was armed at the time.[2] Hallock would also take out the gun in the glove compartment and place it near her.[2] Green then reportedly tied Flynn's hands with a shoelace” What was Grren’s weapon? A knife? A rock? Why didn’t Hallock use the gun from the glove compartment to defend herself and Flynn? Were Flynn’s hands tied behind his back or in front of his waist?

These are just two examples. There are many more if you look.

Also Green has been released from prison.