User talk:A'Jenai Thompson/sandbox

Max AdamsTuj53916 (talk) 15:22, 25 October 2019 (UTC)

1. I think the addition of the verse from the Quran was important and added a lot to the article. I think it was important to add that Allah is forgiving, and incidental consumption of pork and consumption of pork when you are forced to is not a sin. This was a good addition to the article, and added a lot. I also thought the addition to the food allergy article was a good addition, because it added additional information that wasn't previously in the article.

2. There aren't many sections in the article that seem unnecessary, as the additions were minimal and didn't seem unnecessary.

3. Does the article focus too much on negative or positive information? Explain. I don't think the article focuses too much on negative or positive information. The additions to the article are mostly neutral facts, and these facts are presented neutrally. There could possibly be more positive information regarding religious restrictions of the consumption of pork, such as benefits people receive from not eating pork.

Remember, neutral doesn't mean "the best positive light" or "the worst, most critical light." It means a clear reflection of various aspects of a topic.

4. Does the article draw conclusions or try to convince the reader to accept one particular point of view?Are most statements in the article connected to a reliable source, such as textbooks and journal articles? Or do they rely on blogs or self-published authors? The article doesn't try to convince the reader to accept a particular point. The additions to the article are all neutral, and does not try to persuade the reader in one direction. The sources are all credible, and there are no issues with the sources.

5. Are there any changes you would suggest the author apply to the article? Why? I wouldn't suggest many changes, just maybe add possible positive aspects of not eating pork.

6. Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know! We actually had the same article, so we were able to discuss the article and what other changes we could make, and brainstorm the article.

7. Write your name followed up by "Tuj53916 (talk) 15:22, 25 October 2019 (UTC)" Max AdamsTuj53916 (talk) 15:44, 28 October 2019 (UTC)

Thank you for reviewing my article A'Jenai ThompsonA&#39;Jenai Thompson (talk) 16:01, 4 November 2019 (UTC)

To this article, I added another verse from the Quran that supported why pork should not be consumed in the Islamic religion. I felt as though one supporting verse was not enough. A'Jenai ThompsonA&#39;Jenai Thompson (talk) 21:18, 17 November 2019 (UTC)