User talk:A.S Khan

August 2020
Hello, I'm Meters. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Biryani ‎, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources. If you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. Meters (talk) 23:59, 18 August 2020 (UTC)

Please do not add commentary, your own point of view, or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to Biryani. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. MrOllie (talk) 00:20, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
 * And the chef's or restaurant's website is not a source we can use. Meters (talk) 00:22, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

I really cant understand. Like it's obviously written by me as a native of the region I mean I guess it was from the neutral point of view. Please tell me about the reference should I use the news paper refrenfe then? regards. A.S Khan (talk) 00:25, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Did you read WP:RS? It's not obvious at all. We don't know who you are or where you live, and it wouldn't make any difference. We don't write Wikipedia based on editors' personal knowledge or opinions. And we don't write it based on what subjects write about themselves. If you can find reliable, independent, secondary sources that discuss this variant as something that is actually a real variant and not just some chef's particular version.then you can add it, but in neutral language.
 * '===Dhakaiya Fakhruddin Biriany===
 * "Fakhruddin Biriyani" a famous style of biriyani by cheff Fakhruddin is also renowned for it's charming flavour and aroma.' has so many problems I don't where to start. It's unsourced, it's promotional, It uses WP:WEASEL wording. It violates WP:MOS. (Is there some reason you think this one particular variant deserves a higher level header than all the others? And why do you have quotes around the variant?) It has basic spelling and grammar errors ("it's" is not possessive: it means "it is",  "cheff" is spelled "chef", and since you are using it as a title then it should be "Chef"). Meters (talk) 01:41, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

For the unnoticed grammer and spelling mistake I'm totally sorry for this! As I'm not a native Englishman but I will definitely shall be more carefull about that! The reason I didn't double cheak this as it was literally my first attempt before it was deleted within minutes by you you while I was working about making the para and giving it a title.

Apart from that I understand u call it promotional and kinda biased openion bcz it's also obvious I didn't understand on the first place about the source which could be regarded as authentic. So I used the the restaurants site referece.

You see first I didn't understand about the referece until you had removed and told me about it. then I refereced something. And now that I understand from ur talkings that I needa give more authentic one. I even asked you what type of reference shall I gonna put. You gotta understand I'm a newbie here.

and about ur saying that if if I tried to make it higher level. That's solely my presentation error. I didn't try to make it sound superior because it was headed under "dhakaiya Biriany or sth" title. That makes it regional whoever understands the word Dhakaiya. So no fight here. Moreover I shall try to improve with wordings. I used the quotation marking on " fakruddin Biriany" because to it's a single item again to be mentioned im a newbie in English Wikipedia. And I'm very much aware of nutrality.

Man I apreciate everything specially specific instructions. Thanks a lot.Specific intruction helps newbies. A.S Khan (talk) 03:42, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

I would like to know I guess this discussion is over is there anyway to clean this conversation? A.S Khan (talk) 20:00, 19 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Editors are at liberty to remove material from their talk pages, with very limited exceptions. None of those exceptions apply to anything currently on your page, so you may blank the entire page if you wish. Meters (talk) 03:26, 20 August 2020 (UTC)