User talk:A.benson99/New sandbox

Hi,

I think you did a great job editing that specific section of your article. One suggestion I have for you would maybe be to take out the two sentences where you added the long quote. I am not sure if it is necessary to include the whole quote and I know that Wikipedia stresses using your own wording/ avoiding lengthy straight-from-source quotations. Otherwise, I think you used a very neutral tone and I found your edit/ article very informative. Good job and good luck!

Gabby