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Comment from Sarah about Add to an article assignment --198.48.224.245 (talk) 21:53, 8 March 2019 (UTC) I have confirmed that I've found your add to an article assignment in your sandbox. Please note that the instructions were to put your addition into the article you chose to modify.

Ethan343's Peer Review
As this is not a full article and just a paragraph being added in, a lead section was not necessary. The general progression of the paragraph is easy to follow but there are grammar mistakes that make it harder to follow. (eg. A large amount of wastewater that is generated worldwide from human activities has negative impacts on the environment and human health.) (eg. Higher quantities of biogas are produced when wastewater is co-fermented with other residual (residual organic matter?) from the dairy, sugar, and brewing industries.) Gives a good brief overview of wastewater and its conversion to biogas. More information could be added on such as more on the "abundance and toxicity of wastewater make it a major feedstock for biogas plants" which is in the reason for adding section. The last 2 sentences of the paragraph provide the bulk of the information while the first few are introductory. There could be a few more sentences added into the "body" of the paragraph that could help make it a stronger addition. Both sources are from a peer reviewed journal and are reliable. Although, both sources are cited at the end of the paragraph which is incorrect. The citations should be at the end of whatever information was taken and added into the paragraph instead.
 * Lead Section
 * Structure
 * Coverage
 * Content
 * Source Reliability

--Ethan343 (talk) 21:58, 26 February 2019 (UTC)

Response to review
Thank you for your peer-review comments. Your comments provide me some important points that I can improve on, especially the correct way to insert citation into the paragraph. I didn't realize i was doing it wrong the whole time and now I learned the right way. — Preceding unsigned comment added by A8218054 (talk • contribs) 00:48, 9 March 2019 (UTC)