User talk:ABJL2017

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (November 30)
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David. moreno 72   07:11, 30 November 2017 (UTC)

Intelligence and culture
First of all, orcas (animals in general) don't have the concept of "intelligence", so it makes no sense saying that "they interpret the concept differently depending on their culture" (which is the entire point of the addition made by User:7801CFME). Secondly, even if animals spended their time thinking about intelligence (which thing they do not), a more articulated, extensive, and in depth paragraph than the one added by User:7801CFME would be required, since the current addition is focused only on human intelligence (which is obvious since, like I said, animals don't spend their time thinking about intelligence like we humans do).

Finally, I don't know if you and User:7801CFME are the same person (he referred to animal intelligence just after you did, but I don't see any communication between the two of you, and you edited in the same exact way in my Talk page), but if you are, I would like to remind you that sock puppetry is forbidden. Drow (talk) 08:31, 1 December 2017 (UTC)

coi
Please do not add discussions of your own work or even links to your own work to WP articles. The way to do it is to suggest them on the article talk page, and someone else will add them if they think them appropriate. If you continue doing so, you are likely to be blocked from contributing.  DGG ( talk ) 21:35, 10 December 2017 (UTC)