User talk:ACC NYMgr

Ann Bannon
Hello and welcome to Wikipedia. I have reverted your edits to Ann Bannon's article for the following reasons:


 * It is a Featured article and the standards are very high about what can be included.
 * Many of the details you inserted are tangential to Bannon's life and work. The article needs to remain concise. Your username suggests you are editing in some capacity for the Hourglass Group or some theater entity. I can appreciate that some of the details may be relevant, but too much of them, such as listing all the producers (Tomlin and Wagner are notable, the others, unfortunately, are not), or the theaters the play ran in, come off as spam or trivia.
 * References at the end of sentences are preferred over embedded citations. Either way, unless the website of the Hourglass Group has information relevant to Bannon's life, it should not be linked to the article.

Please let me know if you have questions. Thank you. --Moni3 (talk) 20:56, 28 September 2010 (UTC)