User talk:ACaliforniaA/sandbox

Hello Aishwarya!

Your content for this topic is really strong. I think you have a really good grasp on the background and implications of social epidemiology, I had never really heard of this before. I have two major suggestions moving forward with this article! 1) I think that you could create links for more of the words in your article. You have WHO and CDC linked, but words such as epidemiologists, urban planning, and Ministerial Conference, for example, could be linked as well to increase traffic to your page. 2) I was just reading another students' section and they really took advantage of the sub-titles and sub-categories aspects of the article so that the article was broken up into multiple titles and had a table of contents. This article is very information heavy and a dense paragraph, so I would recommend breaking it up into subsections for the final draft (I need to do the same thing, too!) Overall, great job Aishwarya!! I enjoyed reading your article!

Abbey

Abigaicatherine (talk) 21:00, 21 November 2017 (UTC)