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ADJ Wright's Peer Review of Kathryn Anderson
Overall a well put together article. There is much information with neutral content. Consider the following small changes if you please: - Refer to Anderson as "Anderson" rather than the pronoun "she" in the "Early Life" section. This may help the article flow more smoothly. - Consider renaming "Career" Section "Academic/Medical Career" since all the content has to deal with academia or medicine. Not necessary, just more specific.

Again, overall a well put together article!