User talk:ADumestre/sandbox

Evaluate an Article
I see you took good notes in class, but now's the time to evaluate one of your chosen articles. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:47, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Edit an Article
Your sources and summaries look good. You should fix the second citation. Finally, look at the whole section of the article. Right now, it's little more than a list of studies and their findings. Are they presented in a logical order? Could you add a topic sentence or combine some of the sentences together to make the section more cohesive? Josef Horáček (talk) 18:47, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

Final Assessment
I see that you added valuable new information with a source, but the whole section of the article (effects of legalizing medical cannabis) still needs to be rewritten. At the very least, a topic sentence summarizing the content would have helped. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:26, 6 May 2019 (UTC)