User talk:AEMMM15/sandbox

Internal References
There are a couple of internal references you could add for Biology, New York University, New York City, Georgia, Fairbanks, tuberculosis, American Nurse Association, Alaskan Nursing Association, Alaska Women's Commission Hall of Fame and Alaska Nurse's Hall of Fame. You have a lot of great facts so adding these internal references will help for anyone wanting to read more.Starwarrior1221 (talk) 23:38, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
 * I have added to the items stated above, as well as some others. Thank you for pointing this out.AEMMM15 (talk) 19:06, 27 October 2018 (UTC)

Retirement and Legacy
I like the idea of this subheading but the information found inside of it is repetitive. You can find the same information in the career section. Is there anything else you could add to the legacy? Maybe look for any books, awards, etc that were made in her honor.Starwarrior1221 (talk) 23:40, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
 * I have added more information regarding the legacy and retirement subsection of the article. I have revised the section to be more geared towards what awards and what has been named in her honor.AEMMM15 (talk) 19:05, 27 October 2018 (UTC)

peer review
1. You have a typo in the section of career it says 'ti' instead of 'to' 2. I like what you have in Career section, lots of good facts about her and her life BUTTT it gets little repetitive when you get into the legacy part of the article. Maybe if you found any rewards she may have won, or specific honors that would help this section. 3. I think if you were to add more internal hyperlinks it would make the article more legitimate 4. The article is really good other than those. You did a good job with the facts and using sources. Arciss (talk) 15:54, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
 * I have fixed the typo in the career section and have revised the legacy and retirement section of this article. Additional internal links were also added. Thank you for the feedback!AEMMM15 (talk) 19:07, 27 October 2018 (UTC)