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Racial impact in the United States

 * Lopez has been noted to have held a considerable amount of influence over Latin race over the years, although her importance to the Caucasian and African American audiences has also been recognized. → This makes it seem like we are just going to skip over her influence on the "Latin race" (Latin race, what does that even mean?) and just mentioning her effect on Caucasian and African American audiences. Try to avoid using terms such as "noted" and "recognized", unless you are citing it being from a specific person. For example: Lopez has been noted to have held a considerable amount of influence. Basically, I'm not exactly sure what the point of this sentence actually is, it seems more like a conclusion in the lead.