User talk:AKAnthony/sandbox

Feedback on First Draft of Contribution
Nicely done.

These thoughts are in no particular order:
 * Check out the Manual of Style for guidance on how to treat tiitles
 * Also remember that Wikipedia doesn't capitalize every word of headings - again - see the MOS
 * Check punctuation carefully for correct use of commas and complete clause punctuation
 * A possibility for expansion might be the research that indicates a woman's display of masculine traits is often criticized as being too macho or in some other way inappropriate. It makes an interesting and intriguing contrast with the research you've cited indicating that masculine traits and communication styles are essential to advancement.Jagrif02 (talk) 12:46, 18 October 2016 (UTC)