User talk:AKort24/Jacqueline Jones Royster/DThatcher99 Peer Review

Clarifications
FYI - the "lead" refers to the introductory summary paragraph at the beginning of every Wikipedia article. See the "Evaluating Articles" training module for a refresher.

I think it's important for new articles to include a lead, so you might reorganize some of what you've got in this draft to do so. See, for instance, the bios on women like Doja Cat, Toni Morrison, Henrietta Lacks, and others. Sondra Perl's bio is also a good example of a beginning bio of an academic.

Reading other Wikipedia bios can also give you clarity on the organization of your content. Notice, for instance, that your content is mostly reverse chronological. Wikipedia bio articles, however, are chronological in order after the lead.

Also, you should try to link to other articles in your Wikipedia article. To do so, add the word/phrase, then click the link icon in the editor and Wikipedia will provide you with a list of possible links for you to choose.

Good work, but keep going! Pthomas4 (talk) 20:43, 9 November 2023 (UTC)