User talk:AL020494

Mira Lesmana
Would I be correct in assuming that you are the same editor who was working with Mira Lesmana previously? Several points about your edits:

1) Double check your grammar; "some time going to three different cinemas in one day." should be "sometimes going to three different cinemas in one day." (for example) 2) Make sure all of the sources you are citing are reliable. You'd likely be expected to explain what makes muvila.com and movienthusiast.com reliable. Kapanlagi is known to have had glaring errors; I've stopped using it, myself. 3) You are using weasel words and other problematic phrasing. "Veteran actor", for example, is a bit too promotional; use "actor" instead. "All-star cast" is likewise overly promotional. The phrase "lukewarm reaction from audiences despite having an all-star cast and an estimated budget of 25 billion rupiah" is also problematic, because it suggests that with the cast and budget should have meant a suggest.

I have sent you a copy of this note by email. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:26, 23 March 2017 (UTC)