User talk:ALM1776

August 2014
Hello, I'm Barek. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Edible Arrangements seemed less than neutral to me, so I removed it for now. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. --- Barek (talk • contribs) - 15:41, 20 August 2014 (UTC)

Please do not add commentary or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to Edible Arrangements. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. The prior version contained claims from both sides, it was balanced. Your version contains soapboxing, and lacks third-party reliable sources. It is far from following WP:NPOV. --- Barek (talk • contribs) - 16:12, 20 August 2014 (UTC)
 * While the original version needs improvement, your version is far from neutral itself - and arguably much worse in the other direction. Please use the article talk page to address your concerns. --- Barek (talk • contribs) - 16:27, 20 August 2014 (UTC)

Edible Arrangements
Note: I have greatly trimmed the section to give it considerably less weight, per WP:WEIGHT; while trying to improve the neutral point of view, per WP:NPOV; as well as improve the sourcing used for the section, per WP:RS. I have also commented on the article talk page about these changes. Please follow-up with concerns on the article talk page. --- Barek (talk • contribs) - 16:57, 20 August 2014 (UTC)