User talk:ALcrimsonblue/sandbox

Jason Peer Edit
In the RNA Polymerase Binding Inhibition section possibly try to indent or use bullet points for the three factors because it seems like there are more than three inhibitions. I see that you made the font smaller on the 3 subsections, however I think its still hard to catch.

@Jason for some reason it won't let me indent unfortunately. I see what you mean though. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ALcrimsonblue (talk • contribs) 13:24, 23 June 2022 (UTC)

DJ Peer Review
Add hyperlink or more definition for distal control elements, initiation complex, elongation complex, and Rb tumor suppressor

Expand the second sentence in "General Chromatin Modification" sentence a bit to clarify what each of those molecules actually do, not just what they are. Maybe group them by their function.

In the last sentence when discussing the gene specific coregulators, maybe change the example to something more understandable to the general audience. You can maybe even tie the function of a corepressor to cancer or something that non-bio people will want to know more about, rather than listing technical transcription machinery

My Bio major girlfriend helped me peer edit this and she got very into it lol. She said you did a great job! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Djwa319 (talk • contribs) 14:54, 26 June 2022 (UTC)

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This is solid. I think the others covered the big stuff, but I'd make a couple minor tweaks: - It's typical to put the citation after the period on Wikipedia. - The first paragraph and the text under "Promoter Clearance Inhibition" could be split into more paragraphs. - Some diagrams would be helpful for the more complex topics.

Some of the content is over my head, so I can't get into much detail on clarity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by KingClemson (talk • contribs) 16:36, 26 June 2022 (UTC)