User talk:AMousou/Medium ground finch/Beekeepergabi Peer Review

Thank you so much for your suggestions.
I have corrected the spelling mistake, and appreciate the good ideas for the parasites section. Ayahbear127 (talk) 02:33, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi Beekeepergabi, we will take into account the fact that it sounds as if a certain tone is being used and we will make sure to fix that for the future drafts. Also we will definitely specify which type of relationship that the ground finches and parasites have under that section, overall I'm happy that you like the outline and can't wait to share once we have finalized everything. Fevans9 (talk) 02:53, 25 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Good Evening,
 * I hope all is well; I really enjoyed reading your feedback. Thank you for pointing out that typo for the word "Habitat;" I truly appreciate it. You are always more than welcome to edit that typo in the sandbox. I will definitely take your advice about the lead when editing the article. A good portion was removed as it went into detail about a topic that should have been more brief for the lead. I will also try to make the lead straight to the point rather than adding the "fluff." I also really liked your idea about possibly adding what relationship the parasites and medium ground finches may have. That is a great idea.
 * Thank you so much for your feedback.
 * Best Regards,
 * (AMousou (talk) 03:27, 25 October 2023 (UTC)