User talk:AMousou/Medium ground finch/Octobercosmos Peer Review

Thank you for the review.
Our main topic is natural selection so morphology is something we have to include in the article. We intend to include Darwin and his work with finches as supplemental information. Thank you for your constructive critique.Ayahbear127 (talk) 02:45, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi Octobercosmos, we will edit our lead and make sure to make it more clear and add sources that support the statements. Yes, we haven't got to make any much edits yet but thank you for providing feedback on how we should provide more recent sources and look into adding morphology. Fevans9 (talk) 03:06, 25 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Good Evening,
 * I hope all is well; I really enjoyed the review. I also agree that the lead should include some information or mention the studies done by Darwin and the change in morphology of medium ground finches. We will also try to organize the lead more in the order of the topics that follow. I really thank you for your ideas and plan to try to implement them in our edits.
 * Best Regards,
 * (AMousou (talk) 03:34, 25 October 2023 (UTC)