User talk:AMousou/Medium ground finch/Peanutbutters11 Peer Review

Thank you for the review and suggestions.
I agree the second paragraph of the lead is a little wordy, however, as you have mentioned we are just in the beginnings of improving this page. Thank you for the idea of adding mating processes under the behavior subsection, that does seem like it will improve the article. Ayahbear127 (talk) 02:41, 25 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Good Evening,
 * I hope all is well; I also agree with the idea that the original article has a wordy lead about inbreeding depression. In our sandbox, we limit the amount of information and mention it as a topic that will follow in detail for the article. I really enjoyed reading the review and I thank you for your ideas.
 * Best Regards,
 * (AMousou (talk) 03:31, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi Peanutbutters11, thank you for your feedback which we will definitely take into consideration. It will help since we have not really started the draft. Fevans9 (talk) 03:00, 25 October 2023 (UTC)