User talk:ANIKAA26/Sandbox/Natural Hair Community

You are off to a good start. The intro paragraph is working, but I would ask that you expand a little on what reclaiming means.Malikc (talk) 17:45, 25 April 2018 (UTC)

This is a good start! Maybe clarify on what the Black hair community is a little bit more - is it a group or organization? Or a community or population of people? To make the introductory paragraph stronger try introducing your main points of the article! Snmills (talk) 23:48, 29 April 2018 (UTC)


 * Thank you both for the responses! I will improve the leading paragraph and add in the main points. ANIKAA26 (talk) 01:56, 30 April 2018 (UTC)