User talk:APhysicae/Élisabeth Giacobino

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Hi, here are some thoughts about your sandbox:
 * Foreign language words and phrases are italicized (Attaché de Recherche)
 * As part of her involvement to advocate for the future of young physicist I think this should be physicists, plural
 * You don't use any links to other Wikipedia articles in the section "research and contributions". I would consider adding a few to help build the tree of connectivity across the site
 * I'd add some more links in the Awards section as well, such as The Optical Society and European Physical Society
 * Looks like two of the awards are cited but the rest are not. For the sake of verifiability, it would be helpful to make sure all the awards are cited.
 * The sections come across a bit like a wall of text. I would consider adding some paragraph breaks to help structure the ccontent more

I think this is looking really nice :) Another job well done! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:10, 9 June 2020 (UTC)